Thursday, October 1, 2026

2026 #FallWritingFrenzy entry!

It is that time of year again. Time for Kaitlyn Sanchez and Lydial Ludkidis' annual writing challenge #FallWritingFrenzy: in 200 words or less, tell a story or poem for kids.


This year, I picked the #14 photo as inspiration.




Here is my entry!


                                                                        Petrichor

                                                                 Word Count: 198

 

I turn back at the foot of the waterfall where crisp tendrils of mist dance and swirl around me.

Leaping from their dive and plunge, 

dew drops splash and spray onto the stones and neighboring leaves;

shining like diamonds in the day's fading light.

 

My skin rises, meeting the change of atmosphere with a shiver.

 

My breathing slows as I drink in the earthly flavors that float in the in-between—

under the forest’s arms and canopy,

above the viny ground cover and sponge of moss.

 

Evening shift in the dappled and thinning light,

stretching its deepening shadows around me.

 

I breathe in,

delicious delicate dark greens,

earthy browns,

and greys.

I breathe out,

the warmth of words unsaid,

and wishes yet to be made.

Then,

between breaths,

everything under the sky holds still as the air crackles alive around me.

 

Leaving the forest, my heart faces home,

soil crackles underfoot,

and parched trees above my head lap at the sky.

 

Hungrily, everything devours the smell of petrichor with its heavy promise of rain.

 

In the distance,

echoes from the waterfall that had drowned my ears are replaced by the patter and pelt of fresh rain.

 

Autumn has come home.







For more information about Kaitlyn or Lydia you can find them here:

Kaitlyn: @kaitlynleann17, @kaitlyeann17.bsky.social, @kaitlynlean17     http://kaitlynleannsanchez.com

and Lydia: @LydiaLukidis, @lydialukidis.bsky.cocial, @lydiallukidis7    https://www.lydialukidis.come

24 comments:

  1. Wow!!!! I above this. ❤️

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    1. This is an excellent piece of writing Good luck!

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    2. Awwwww. Thank you. I am thrilled you enjoyed it.

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  2. Gorgeous poem, Laura. A perfect complement to the photo. Best of luck!

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  3. Such a sweet poem! Autumn has definitely come home!

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    1. It truly has. Enjoy your Autumn! Thank you for reading my poem.

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  4. Lovely visuals with this poem. Smells always take us back to the best time of year! Good Luck!

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    1. Thank you! Smells are powerful! I am glad you enjoyed reading it.

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    1. Thank you! And thank you for reading it. I am glad you enjoyed it.

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  6. Lovely imagery. This is beautiful!

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  7. So thoughtful and visceral.

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  8. The imagery is amazing! Well done!

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    1. Than you so much! I am really happy you enjoyed reading it.

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  9. Hi, Laura! This photo was in my shortlist , and I'm a 12x 12er too. I was unfamiliar with the word petrichor, so you have taught me a new word. Kids need exposure to lyricism too. Nice!

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    1. Awwww. Thank you for enjoying this piece. I have been really shocked by how many people were unfamiliar with this word. As someone who lives in the PNW, we live this smell OFTEN, so it's always on my mind.

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  10. I can feel the mist and smell the petrichor from your description. Thanks for taking me there:)

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    1. Thank you for going on the poem walk with me. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it!

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    1. Thank you Mary. I am glad you enjoyed reading my piece.

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