Saturday, April 2, 2022

Just my little note about my little 144 ditty for #Springflingkidlit

It's that time again!  And for this year's submission, I am throwing convention out the window and writing about something icky not pretty... something, that to this day taps me on the shoulder with PTSD (Alaskan Childhood- never screens on windows). 

Why you ask?  Why would I write about something so tense for children?

Because it's true, they still exist and by writing about it, reading it, we can accept and maybe even laugh about the universal SHIVER we all have at the soundeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeEEeeeeee


Yes, I wrote a story about mosquitoes.  It's a very spring thing if you ask me. Note female mosquitoes' "hum" is louder and more high-pitched than the male, hence, the "her" in the piece.


So, here it is, all 144-words.  I hope you "enjoy" my reposting of- Mosquito’s Spring Serenade-(GIF) in the previous post.


Good Luck to all entries.  And "Hello Spring!"


Mosquito’s Spring Serenade

 

Undercovers,

windows open,

awake,

not sleeping,

I wish to dream.

 

Body tired,

Eyelids drooping,

I long for peaceful sleep,

while fresh aromas,

in spring air magic,

waft the sheets above my feet.

 

I dare not rest.

 

I dare not nod.

 

I dare not move an inch.

A thunderstorm,

Thump-Thump,

Thump-Thump

of heartbeats…distract and strain my ears.

 

With breath withheld, hands tense and ready, I listen…

 

She’s here, in my room,

              eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeEEeeeeee

 

near my bed,

              EEeeeeeeeeeeEEEeeeeeee

 

flying circles above my head…

EEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeEEEeeeee

 

Close,

EEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeee

 

And closer,

EEEEEEEEEEEEeeeee…eeeEEEEEE…

 

Hungry,

EeeeeeeeeEEEEEEEEEEEEeeeee

 

Her serenade, 

overwhelming, 

until—All QUIET—RUSTLE—SLAP!

I missed.

She flies away,

              EeeeeeeeeeeeeeEeeeeEEEeeeee… EeeeeEEEeeeee

 

And the night ticks on S—L—O—W—L—Y as I slip restlessly, into sleep.

 

And the hungry monster,

 

takes…

EeeeeeeeeeeeeeEeeeeEEEeeeee… EeeeeEEEeeeee

 

…Her…

EeeeeEEEeeeee

 

Time.

 

Awake from dreaming,

Morning rested,

Fresh and warm and cozy,

I stretch, then…

 

Scratch…

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