It is that time of year again. Time for Kaitlyn Sanchez and Lydial Ludkidis' annual writing challenge #FallWritingFrenzy: in 200 words or less, tell a story or poem for kids.
This year, I picked the #14 photo as inspiration.
Here is my entry!
Petrichor
Word Count: 198
I turn
back at the foot of the waterfall where crisp tendrils of mist dance and swirl
around me.
Leaping
from their dive and plunge,
dew drops
splash and spray onto the stones and neighboring leaves;
shining
like diamonds in the day's fading light.
My skin
rises, meeting the change of atmosphere with a shiver.
My
breathing slows as I drink in the earthly flavors that float in the in-between—
under the forest’s
arms and canopy,
above the
viny ground cover and sponge of moss.
Evening
shift in the dappled and thinning light,
stretching
its deepening shadows around me.
I breathe in,
delicious delicate
dark greens,
earthy
browns,
and greys.
I breathe
out,
the warmth
of words unsaid,
and wishes
yet to be made.
Then,
between
breaths,
everything
under the sky holds still as the air crackles alive around me.
Leaving
the forest, my heart faces home,
soil
crackles underfoot,
and parched
trees above my head lap at the sky.
Hungrily, everything
devours the smell of petrichor with its heavy promise of rain.
In the
distance,
echoes
from the waterfall that had drowned my ears are replaced by the patter and pelt
of fresh rain.
Autumn has
come home.
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Kaitlyn: @kaitlynleann17, @kaitlyeann17.bsky.social, @kaitlynlean17 http://kaitlynleannsanchez.com
and Lydia: @LydiaLukidis, @lydialukidis.bsky.cocial, @lydiallukidis7 https://www.lydialukidis.come
Wow!!!! I above this. ❤️
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad you enjoyed it!!!
DeleteThis is an excellent piece of writing Good luck!
DeleteGorgeous poem, Laura. A perfect complement to the photo. Best of luck!
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